Look i am aiming for: http://imgur.com/a/k6yDv
Some key concept frames: http://imgur.com/a/8xdZh I render out the frames in Maxwell, physical rendering makes it look a lot more miniture with accurate focus giving it a more cutesy look suitable for kids, worked from home today so I had to use my demo licence of maxwell to render hence the watermark. Would be helpful to have a student licence...
New animatic, has camera moves in it that are better yet I still have no idea how to visualise certain parts so they are left static as for now until I get advice tomorrow in class and at dailies. It still needs work but it works better I think: youtu.be/HZZYBuvGeU8