I have altered my script in light of consult with hages and have come up with this:
The story is also changed along with the aesthetic look:
Shot 01: Car passes the camera underhead on a highway road.
Shot 02: Cut to Car driving into distance along road.
Shot 03: (POV): Car drives along the road, can see 'audiences' legs and arms directing the car.
Shot 04: (POV): New message sound, the 'audience' picks up the phone off the passenger chair raising it infront of face obscuring road.
Shot 05: Cut to rear of car moving toward edge of road.
Shot 6: (POV): Driver puts phone down and guides the car back into the lane.
Shot 07: (POV): New message sound, the 'audience' picks up the phone off the passenger chair raising it infront of face obscuring road.
Shot 08: Cut to rear of car, camera closer to ground and car tyres, car veers toward the edge of road and hit the white stripes.
Shot 09: (POV) Cut to Driver dropping phone and on lap and swerving back onto road.
Shot 10: (POV) Driver continues driving, phone beeps and driver raises phone to face.
Shot 11: Cut to under car, camera right next front tyre and skimming the road as tyre veers off the edge of road.
Shot 12: (POV) Driver veers back on to road and brings phone back to face.
Shot 13: (POV) Driver hears the road bumping under car, drops phone to reveal tree and grabs steering wheel.
Shot 14: (POV) Car collides with tree and cuts to black.
Shot 15: Slogan and logo.
I will do it in Unreal Engine with realistic aesthetics and VR (Oculous Rift) in mind